Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Third Revision plus a few grammar points

Good afternoon, everyone!

Today Kevin will pass back your first essay. Most of you will be asked to submit a 3rd revision, as there are still many errors. You must return all copies to Kevin!

Today, we will also work on a few grammar points and capitalization rules.

If you finish everything you need to do in class, please check out this article about suicide among young Japanese job seekers and write a short comment in the comment box below.

http://www.yomiuri.co.jp/dy/national/T120513002004.htm

Hopefully, your own job hunting will be successful! In any case, don't lose heart! Something good will happen in time!

* When you write a comment, please remember to write your name at the end of the comment. Kevin gives points for comments written, but if there is no name, you get no credit!
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14 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:17 PM

    I never suicide if I can't find my job. Never!!!
    I think job find sometime if you never give up. So alive. Life is a lot of things pain and sad and more,,, but very exciting too.

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  2. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:19 PM

    It's serious problem in the world. We must make up comfortable country. Now we help each other but If you can't find job. You have to keeping move. Suicide is wrong way to answer.

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  3. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:19 PM

    My name is Yukiko. I think if we can't get jobs, we don't suicide. For example, we can more study for some qualified.

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  4. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:23 PM

    I think they should continue finding a job even if they fail in job hunting. (yui)

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  5. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:24 PM

    I don't think suicide, I can't believe it,
    If I think suicide, I'll lost my life.

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  6. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:25 PM

    Suicide is so stupid I think. If there`re no job to find, It`s not end of the world. That`s so stupid.

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  7. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:26 PM

    I think people are not live for get a job!! we should think our lifestyle. of course job is important part of life but it is not all part.

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  8. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:26 PM

    I think teens are very weak. there are give up easier.Strong peoples are not decide suicide!!Kouji Tabeta

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  9. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:26 PM

    My name is Akira.This ploblem is familiar thing. I think is I can't jobs, I challenge again,again. Now,world is very crazy.It is important to live strong

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  10. AnonymousMay 16, 2012 at 10:27 PM

    My name is Daichi. I think it's a realistic issue. I want to believe that it's not enlargement.

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  11. AnonymousMay 23, 2012 at 9:30 PM

    I think that I have to study hard to get a job.
    Takayuki

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