Motorcycles are better than cars. First, motorcycles are more exciting than cars. When you ride them, you feel the wind rushing into your face and against your body. It makes you feel like you’re going a thousand kilometers an hour. The road is only centimeters below, and you can see the ground racing past as you cruise at top speed. You know you’re challenging death as you lean into every turn.
Next, motorcycles are cheaper than cars. To buy a decent used car, you have to spend at least 400,000 yen. A nice used motorcycle is about half that much! Moreover, the gasoline and parts are cheaper as well. And we usually don’t have to pay for parking. If you’re a student, you can usually save money by owning a motorcycle instead of a car.
Finally, motorcycles have a sexier image than cars. If you buy a used car, maybe you have to get an old, dirty economy car. The image is not cool, and you look like an old man or an old lady driving it. But if you have a motorcycle, everyone will think you are cool and exciting! You can attract girls easily and some people will be afraid of you. Having a motorcycle will make you look like a TV or movie star!
Essay Writing students. Your 3 paragraph comparison essay first draft is due Wed. May 19.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Choose two things to compare.
2) Decide which one is better.
3) Make 3 reasons why it`s better. Each reason will be a separate paragraph.
4) Expand on the reasons. Give examples and details that make the reason convincing.
5) The first sentence in your essay will state clearly that one is better than the other. This is your Thesis Sentence.
6) Your first reason and examples, details, etc. can be in the first paragraph.
7) Your second reason and examples, details, etc. are your second paragraph.
8) Your third reason and examples, details, etc. are your third paragraph.
* We will discuss introductions and conclusions next time. This essay is a simplified version with no introduction and conclusion.
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Compare 2 Things as a blog comment. Here are some ideas:
ReplyDelete1) Two fast food chains
2) Two cities or towns
3) Two famous attractions
4) Trains & subways or trains & buses
5) Japanese food & Western food
6) Two sports (for example, soccer & baseball)
7) Recorded music & live music
8) Living with your family & living alone
9) Guy friends & girl friends
10) Two part-time jobs
These are just suggestions; you can choose two other things to compare in your comment.
Two part time job
ReplyDeleteConvenience Store is better than Pachinko Shop
Convenience Store is easire than Pachinko Shop. First, pachinko shop staff carrys heavy box. And they dispose of pachinko machine. But Convenience Store only wait on customers.
Recorded music and live music
ReplyDeleteI think that live music is better than recorded music. Because recorded music is nomal style. But, live music is very powerful. A lot of instruments sound is powerful. It sounds makes me fun.
Living with your family & living alone
ReplyDeleteLiving with my family better than living alone. Because, living alone is harder than living with my family. For example, I can't cook. If I live alone, I eat only fast food. And I think that living alone is lonly.
Japanese food & western food
ReplyDeleteJapanese food is better than western food. Japanese food are everything natural and healty, because Japanese food is using like soybeans,rice,fish and a lots more stuff, japanese food are looks very good and smell so healty. but western food ushing a lots of deep fly and cans stuff.
Yokosuka is better than Yokohama.
ReplyDeleteFirst, Yokosuka has more nature than Yokohama does. There are many places that have green. Many fields can be seen as well. It is also surrounded by the ocean. People can go to the sea to swim or have a barbecue in the summer.
Second, Yokosuka is more international than Yokohama. There is an American base and places to talk with its people in Yokosuka. Residents of Yokosuka often can get some opportunities that they chat with those people.
Finally, Yokosuka has less cars than Yokohama. Most of residents in Yokosuka work in Yokohama. Then, they return to Yokosuka from their works in the evening. As a result, there are not many cars on the roads in the daytime.
Yokosuka is better than Yokohama because of the rich nature, the environment of the cultural exchange and having small amount of cars.
Trains better than buses. Because trains just come here. Trains doesn't late.
ReplyDeleteLiving alone better than living with your family. Because I like alone at home.My mother is noisy.
Disney Land better than Fujikyu highland. Because Disney Land is dream. Everything wonderful world.
The trains are better than buses. First, trains are more precise than buses. Second, the train fare is cheaper than the bus fare. Finally, trains are larger than buses.
ReplyDeleteLiving with your family better than living alone.
ReplyDeleteBeving together with your family is happy.Living alone is lonly.Eating the meal by oneself is sad.It is important to spend with family.
Winter is better than Summer.
ReplyDeleteFirst, Winter is more fun than Summer. There are many events in Winter. For example, the Chrismas and Halloween. Events are exciting.
Second, Winter is colder than Summer. It occasionally snows because it is cold very cold in December and January. People can have a snowball fight.
Finally, Winter is more beautiful than Summer. When the city is illuminated, you should surprised the scenery. The scenery is very beautiful in Winter.